Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Re: Kindly rate my AWA

Hi,

Its Ok, for the 1st time most of the people will not be able to finish in time. But from next time onward time yourself while writing the essay.

The content of the essay is good, but it needed more improvements.

The conclusion was also abrupt, not explaining much why some facts are to be ruled out.

Please go thru the post from Chineseburned reg the Essay->http://gmatclub.com/forum/how-to-get-6-0-awa-my-guide-64327.html

also the word count not more. For getting above 5
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