Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Please kindly critique my first AWA

I've made my first attempt at writing a response to an AWA question. I'd greatly appreciate some feedback from someone with knowledge of how to answer these questions.

Here it goes:

As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting
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