Understanding the droning lecturer with comprehension required the intense concentration of the class members present in the lecture hall, all of whom were students.
Understanding.....comprehension->redundant
class members .........students->only student can suffice.
Extremely wordy. The intended meaning is to understand the droning lecturer, students need to concentrate intensely.
A. Understanding the droning lecturer with comprehension required the intense concentration of the class
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Understanding.....comprehension->redundant
class members .........students->only student can suffice.
Extremely wordy. The intended meaning is to understand the droning lecturer, students need to concentrate intensely.
A. Understanding the droning lecturer with comprehension required the intense concentration of the class
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