lastshot wrote:
Gnpth wrote:
A) All smoke alarms in one's house should be tested once a month, and their batteries should be replaced annually-Sentence Looks good as is- So hold.
B) All smoke alarms in one's house should be tested once their batteries are replaced annually-No Punctuation- Makes it as a run on sentence. Also changes the meaning- Eliminate.
C) One should test all smoke alarms in one's house once a month and annually replace their batteries once ayear- Annually & Once a year- Redundant- Eliminate
B) All smoke alarms in one's house should be tested once their batteries are replaced annually-No Punctuation- Makes it as a run on sentence. Also changes the meaning- Eliminate.
C) One should test all smoke alarms in one's house once a month and annually replace their batteries once ayear- Annually & Once a year- Redundant- Eliminate
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