about your awa your first and second point revolve around the same thing,the various other key factors that might play a role.
the first para , the paraphrase of the argument should be more precise and also include that how are you going to show that the agrument is flawed. You can use terms like premise of the argument is flawed, or the assumptions are unproven..
Also try not to use terms like 'in reality' as the complete situation presented here is hypothetical.
try to be more specific when
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the first para , the paraphrase of the argument should be more precise and also include that how are you going to show that the agrument is flawed. You can use terms like premise of the argument is flawed, or the assumptions are unproven..
Also try not to use terms like 'in reality' as the complete situation presented here is hypothetical.
try to be more specific when
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