Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Please rate my AWA (1 - V - Federville Farms)

Hi all,

It would be great if you could rate my AWA below.

I captured the distribution of time between first jotting down ideas, initial draft and review and update.
Recommendations on timing would also help.
Also, I copied and checked it in Word and found no speling errors. It did not flag any grammatical errors either.

Many thanks in advance!

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