anaccident wrote:
Not sure what specific rule E is violating but the ", with" just feels way out of -place in the sentence.
suppliers are growing fish twice as fast by doing two things:
i) cutting their feed allotment and
ii) raising them on special diets
So,cutting andraising need to have a similar structure. Sinceraising is in the non-underlined portion, we need to havecutting in the underlined portion.
anaccident wrote:
I can't think of a specific reason for eliminating C except that D looks better...
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