Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Re: Rate my AWA

Hello!
Your response is well crafted - should get a 4 - 4.5.
The overall flow of thought is good and you have pointed out the faulty assumptions of the argument.
One suggestion though - remember that while critically evaluating an argument never questions the premise itself.
You might however question the assumptions made on top of those data points (assumptions).

For instance here
"The primary issue with the author's argument lies in his premises. The author mentions that 60% of the
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