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A. Because the 2009 swine flu was caused by the H1N1 virus – the same strain of influenza that had caused the massive 1918 flu pandemic – was why researchers were convinced that it had the potential of killing many millions of people, especially children and the elderly. -------wrong: ‘Because and why’ are redundant
B. Caused by the H1N1 virus, the same strain of influenza that caused the massive 1918 flu pandemic,
A. Because the 2009 swine flu was caused by the H1N1 virus – the same strain of influenza that had caused the massive 1918 flu pandemic – was why researchers were convinced that it had the potential of killing many millions of people, especially children and the elderly. -------wrong: ‘Because and why’ are redundant
B. Caused by the H1N1 virus, the same strain of influenza that caused the massive 1918 flu pandemic,
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