Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Please rate my AWA

Argument -
"The common notion that workers are generally apathetic about management issues is false, or at least outdated: a recently published survey indicates that 79 percent of the nearly 1,200 workers who responded to survey questionnaires expressed a high level of interest in the topics of corporate restructuring and redesign of benefits programs."

My response -

According to the argument, general belief is that workers are not sympathetic or interested in management issues
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