Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Please Rate - I wrote this in a noisy office.

Thanks Olbond.

I have another essay I need review of. This time the people in the office were quiet. However, I couldn't gather my thoughts in a decent amount of time. Enjoy the read. Please critique.Thanks.

Prompt #2:

“In a recent citywide poll, 15 percent more residents said that they watch television programs about the visual arts than was the case in a poll conducted five years ago. During these past five years, the number

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