mbunny wrote:
To meet the rapidly rising market demand for fish and seafood, suppliers are growing fish twice as fast as their natural growth rate, cutting their feedallotment by nearly half and raising them on specialdiets.
"Twice as fast as" doesn't apply to the rate. Rate can only be higher/lower, not faster/slower. Get rid of (A) and(B)
(A) their natural growth rate, cutting their feed allotment
(B) their natural growth rate, their feed allotment cut
(C) growing them naturally,
...
"Twice as fast as" doesn't apply to the rate. Rate can only be higher/lower, not faster/slower. Get rid of (A) and(B)
(A) their natural growth rate, cutting their feed allotment
(B) their natural growth rate, their feed allotment cut
(C) growing them naturally,
...






