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Agricultural scientists have estimated that the annual loss by erosion of arable land caused by heavy rainfall and inadequate flood controls approaches two million acres peryear.
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(A) theannual loss by erosion of arable land caused by heavy rainfall and inadequate flood controls approaches two million acres peryear
1) It's unclear whether "caused" modifies loss, erosion, or even land (although nonsensical).
2) "Annual" and "per year" are redundant.
3) "loss
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