noboru wrote:
A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending onmass.
(A) A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending onmass.
"depending on mass" should modify "star" - it's too far away from the subject.OUT
(B) After passing through a red giant stage, depending on its mass, a star will compress
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(A) A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending onmass.
"depending on mass" should modify "star" - it's too far away from the subject.OUT
(B) After passing through a red giant stage, depending on its mass, a star will compress
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