Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Re: Laboratory studies show that Saluda Natural Spring Water contains seve

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Prompt :

The following appeared in an article in a health–and–fitness magazine:
“Laboratory studies show that Saluda Natural Spring Water contains several of the minerals necessary for good health and that it is completely free of bacteria. Residents of Saluda, the small town where the water is bottled, are hospitalized less frequently than the national average. Even though Saluda
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