GMATNinja
Can't we treat this as a parallelism que. where both highlighted parts should be parallel (noun phrases)
The failing of the book lies not in a lack of attention to scientificdetail but in the depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world with emotional overtones that reduce the credibility of thework.
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Can't we treat this as a parallelism que. where both highlighted parts should be parallel (noun phrases)
The failing of the book lies not in a lack of attention to scientificdetail but in the depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world with emotional overtones that reduce the credibility of thework.
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