OA from Manhattanprep
This sentence describes two features of the new rules. First, they include penalties for children who hoard candy; second, they include rewards for children who share the candy. To express these ideas effectively, the sentence should employ proper parallelism. Idiomatic expressions should be used correctly. Finally, the sentence should contain a main verb that agrees with the plural subject rules.
(A) The modifier to encourage…, while not ungrammatical, is nonsense here:
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This sentence describes two features of the new rules. First, they include penalties for children who hoard candy; second, they include rewards for children who share the candy. To express these ideas effectively, the sentence should employ proper parallelism. Idiomatic expressions should be used correctly. Finally, the sentence should contain a main verb that agrees with the plural subject rules.
(A) The modifier to encourage…, while not ungrammatical, is nonsense here:
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