Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Over time, the costs of processing go down because as organizations le

Hello everyone, may I ask for your evaluation of my essay? And also, if possible, could you score my essay as well?

I used @chineseburned's writing template and this is my second attempt to practice AWA. I got the prompts from mbadotcom (sorry I couldn't put the url bcs I'm new here)

Thank you.

The following appeared as part of an annual report sent to stockholders by Olympic Foods, a processor of frozen foods:

“Over time, the costs of processing go down
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