Hello everyone on GMAT club, I notice that this might be a very old topic, but I'd really appreciate it if someone can check my essay for me, muchthanks!!
Argument (just to repeat it again to avoidconfusion):
Due to the decline demand of the mining technology, all the related corporations are suffering from decline of profit and sales this year, including Blastcom Corporation. Blastcom Corporation is considering adopting one growth strategy: to shift some of the researchers from mining technology
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Argument (just to repeat it again to avoidconfusion):
Due to the decline demand of the mining technology, all the related corporations are suffering from decline of profit and sales this year, including Blastcom Corporation. Blastcom Corporation is considering adopting one growth strategy: to shift some of the researchers from mining technology
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