Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Re: Please rate the following AWA

Hi,

I'm also studying for the GMAT and am hoping to pair up with somebody to work on AWA. Please let me know if you're interested! I can give some feedback and a score, but as previously mentioned, I am not a GMAT expert.

Grade: 4/5

Reasoning:
-overall structure/reasoning captures the main argument flaws, 3rd point is a little weaker IMO
-very repetitive; "the author" is used in almost every sentence
-first person "I" tends to be weaker
-last sentence of first paragraph
...

---