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The choice is a run-on without a conjunction between two ICs, apart from the use of a wrong past perfect tense.
B.1. Whitman’s Leaves ofGrass, which spearheaded the transcendentalist revolution when it had first been published in 1855 , experimented liberally with the poetic form that Whitman described as free verse, 2. the book, a collection of personal, often controversial poems - many of which reference accessing the sublime in terms of the physical can hardly be considered
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The choice is a run-on without a conjunction between two ICs, apart from the use of a wrong past perfect tense.
B.1. Whitman’s Leaves ofGrass, which spearheaded the transcendentalist revolution when it had first been published in 1855 , experimented liberally with the poetic form that Whitman described as free verse, 2. the book, a collection of personal, often controversial poems - many of which reference accessing the sublime in terms of the physical can hardly be considered
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