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Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Re: Please evaluate my sentence below.

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tajul sojib wrote:

Although that the traffic jam which is the common scene at Delhi, the capital of India, where the people belong a busy life is increased in daily for a lot, the authority —government of Delhi state— has taken no step to overcome, however, the situation.

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Hello,

I see that no one has responded, so I will make an attempt. To be honest, you sentence is not well written. The sentence is long, contains unnecessary words, and the meaning is
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