GMAT Sentence Correction (SC) | Re: High in the sky, soaring over the foothills that on hot, dry

High in the sky, soaring over the foothills that on hot, dry days look like brushed brown suede, the condor attains a majesty that is rare among birds in flight -Noting wrong with this one!

The condor,being high in the sky and soaring over foothills that on hot, dry days look like brushed brown suede, attains a rare majesty among birds in flight

The condor,when it is high in the sky and soars over the foothills that on hot dry days lookas if they might be brushed dry suede, attains a majesty