swakar wrote:
Thanks a lot Ron.Your suggestions were really helpful.I posted my essay as a separate thread but i did not receive any reviews. Next time after a write a test can i PM the essay to you and can you let me know my improvements for at least 1 or 2 essays?
Sure thing, Swakar. It's true that I rarely look at AWA entries because I find I repeat myself a lot, so I don't tend to notice them. If you want me to rate one, you can PM me, but you'll see pretty quickly that I always advise the same things (mostly
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