GMAT Sentence Correction (SC) | Re: In 1713, Alexander Pope began his translation of the Illiad,

SPLIT1) THE WORD AFTER THE COMMA MUST REFER BACK TO POPE'S TRANSLATION. IN D AND E THE WORD "A WORK" MUST REFER BACK TO POPE'S TRANSLATION. IN D AND E "A WORK" IS REFERRING TO THE ILIAD. THIS IS WRONG MODIFIER. D AND E ARE OUT.

SPLIT2) IN A "A WORK THAT" IS IN COMMAS. THIS IS NOT RIGHT OR AT LEAST A RED FLAG MUST GO UP. LOOKS/SOUNDS NOT CORRECT GRAMMAR TO HAVE ",A WORK THAT," A IS OUT.

SPLIT3) IN C "THAT HAD TAKEN" (PAST PERFECT TENSE) AND "THAT
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