SPLIT1) PARALLELISM. A CRITIQUE AND A VISION ARE PARALLEL. CRITIQUING AND ENVISIONING ARE PARALLEL. B, C, AND D ARE OUT.
SPLIT2) "AS WELL AS HIS OWN" IS STRANGE. THE WHOLE SENTENCE IS TALKING ABOUT DAVY'S WORK, WHY IS THERE A NEED TO SAY "HIS OWN ENVISIONING". "HIS OWN" IS REDUDANDT. E IS OUT.
SPLIT3) A CRITIQUE VS CRITIQUING. I WENT WITH "A CRITIQUE" BECAUSE THE PRIOR PART PART INTRODUCED A WORK THAT NEEDED TO BE DEFINED, "A CRITIQUE" AFTER
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SPLIT2) "AS WELL AS HIS OWN" IS STRANGE. THE WHOLE SENTENCE IS TALKING ABOUT DAVY'S WORK, WHY IS THERE A NEED TO SAY "HIS OWN ENVISIONING". "HIS OWN" IS REDUDANDT. E IS OUT.
SPLIT3) A CRITIQUE VS CRITIQUING. I WENT WITH "A CRITIQUE" BECAUSE THE PRIOR PART PART INTRODUCED A WORK THAT NEEDED TO BE DEFINED, "A CRITIQUE" AFTER
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