[quote="dj"] The Olympic Games helped to keep peace among the pugnacious states of the Greek[u] world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival’s month
(A) world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival’s month
- It has not spesific error but few red lights
- 1) The use of festival’s month - implies possesivness by the festival of the month. " The month of the festival is preffered.
- Let's hold it for now.
- The use of "in that" is a bit strage. "beucase"
...
(A) world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival’s month
- It has not spesific error but few red lights
- 1) The use of festival’s month - implies possesivness by the festival of the month. " The month of the festival is preffered.
- Let's hold it for now.
- The use of "in that" is a bit strage. "beucase"
...
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