Shawnik wrote:
The electronics manufacturer announced that while earnings grew by 5% in the last quarter, revenue decreased whereasit might have been expected for it to rise .
Ait might have been expected for it to rise
two 'it's for me is redundant here and breaks parallelism
Bit might have been expected to rise
Correct parallelism - revenue decrease whereas 'revenue' might have been expected to rise
Cit might have been expected that it should rise
Same error as in A
Dits rise might have beenexpected
if we replace its with revenue's rise... sounds awkward, thus eliminate
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