Sentence Correction (SC) | Re: Financially unsupported by his doubting family, the young artist ultim

Financially unsupported by his doubting family, the young artist ultimately earned its approval and enjoyed some success when he pursued work modeling for fellow artists and photographers, and photos of him graced the pages of a periodical his father readregularly.

a)Financially unsupported by his doubting family, the young artist ultimately earned its approval and enjoyed some success when he pursued work modeling for fellow artists and photographers, and photos of him graced the pages of a periodical his father read regularly.

b)Financially unsupported by his doubting family, the young artist ultimately earned their approval and enjoyed some success when he pursued work modeling for fellow artists and photographers, where photos of him graced the pages of a periodical his father read regularly.

c)With no familial financial support because they doubted him, the young artist ultimately earned the approval of his family and enjoyed some success when he pursued work
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