Sentence Correction (SC) | Re: Before his election to the presidency of the United States, Ronald Rea

A. indirect N "election", correct but awkward expression "his election to the presidency"
B. not agree in tense: Before becoming - simple tense; was, starred, went - past tense
C. 2 independent clause and a comma without FANBOYS, should add (;) or FANBOYS for linking
D. Before he was elected president of the United States, Ronald Reagan was a prominent movie actor who starred in Bedtime for Bonzo and went on to become governor of California.
mdf checked, meaning checked, past tense checked (was elected, was, starred, went) parallelism checked (starred // went), find no mistake at all
E. wrong mdf "starring"

Statistics : Posted by huonggianghoang • on 17 Jun 2022, 02:00 • Replies 6 • Views 1941

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