Sentence Correction (SC) | Re: While some have compared the vehicle to a tank or an oversized child's

Sentence Structure

--- While some
--------have compared the vehicle to
---------------------------a tank or
--------------------------an oversized child's toy
--------------------------or too large to be a personal car, - Dependent Clause
the company remains undaunted. - IndependentClause

Meaning: some compare the vehicle to a tank or toy but the company remains unfazed

Error:
1. Observe the list in DC clause "tank" or "toy" or "too large" - last par too the list does not make sense
2. Point to note is there is contrast in sentence but no causality

A. While some have compared the vehicle to a tank or an oversized child's toy ortoo
- meaning error

B. Because some have compared the vehicle to a tank or an oversized child'sto y ortoo
- Meaning error - contrast is missing
- last part of the sentence is not making sense

[color=#00a651] C. While some have compared the vehicle to a tank or an oversized child's toy, too
- now last par too
...

Statistics : Posted by Nitin_chaudhary • on 27 Oct 2023, 01:30 • Replies 1 • Views 135

---