Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Laboratory studies show that Saluda Natural Spring Water contains seve

Thanks in advance for evaluating my essay!

The following appeared in an article in a health–and–fitness magazine:

“Laboratory studies show that Saluda Natural Spring Water contains several of the minerals necessary for good health and that it is completely free of bacteria. Residents of Saluda, the small town where the water is bottled, are hospitalized less frequently than the national average. Even though Saluda Natural Spring Water may seem expensive, drinking it instead of tap water is a wise investment in goodhealth.”

My answer:
The argument claims that drinking Saluda Natural Spring Water is a wise investment in good health. However, the argument fails to take into account several key factors and relies on assumptions for which there is no clear evidence. Therefore, the argument is unconvincing and breaks down easily.

First, the argument readily assumes that the residents of Saluda are drinking Saluda Natural Spring Water, and not alternatives like tap water or bottled
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