Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | Re: We have learned from an employee of Windfall, Ltd., that its accountin

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Essay-
The argument claims that the recommendation to institute a policy of checking each purchase invoice for errors for all the clients of the management and consulting firm will help them increase their net gains and even help the firm to secure the Windfall account. Stated in this way, the argument fails to mention several key factors on the basis of which it could be evaluated. The conclusion of the argument relies on the assumptions for which there is no clear evidence. Hence the argument is weak and has several flaws.

First, the argument readily assumes that one incidence of finding errors by checking a sample number of invoices reflects the accounting department's consistent month-on-month errors in checking the invoices. This statement is a stretch and not substantiated in any way. For example, it could be a rare occurrence. It could be possible that the majority of
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