"The above prompt argument " - does not make sense.
"fails to provide evidence to support theassumption that reducing the price of Mercury newspaper – lower than Bugle will increase the number of readers. " - I think you meant conclusion.
"Mercury feels that loweringthat cost than Bugle " - what cost are you referring to?
"regaintheir lost 10,000 readers" - its?
"The argument is confident that ..." - too colloquial.
"an increase in reader"
...
"fails to provide evidence to support theassumption that reducing the price of Mercury newspaper – lower than Bugle will increase the number of readers. " - I think you meant conclusion.
"Mercury feels that loweringthat cost than Bugle " - what cost are you referring to?
"regaintheir lost 10,000 readers" - its?
"The argument is confident that ..." - too colloquial.
"an increase in reader"
...







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