Overall, it looks fine. Good thing is that you have followed the template and given examples to corroborate your pointers.
However, in order to attain a perfect 6.0, I'd like to see
a) Detailed description of assumptions
b) Three assumptions ( when you aren't elaborating much on the first two) With 30 mins in hand, three assumptions can be easily written
Rest, to me, lools fine. But, you can anyway tune in to better the answer by practising AWA with 30 mins timeframe.
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However, in order to attain a perfect 6.0, I'd like to see
a) Detailed description of assumptions
b) Three assumptions ( when you aren't elaborating much on the first two) With 30 mins in hand, three assumptions can be easily written
Rest, to me, lools fine. But, you can anyway tune in to better the answer by practising AWA with 30 mins timeframe.
Sent from my GT-N7100
...
