Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) | AWA review please?

Hi all,

I've just started my prep a week ago and took my first AWA today, I would really appreciate if someone could give me feedback on my essay. I think it's worth mentioning I'm Israeli so English isn't my native language.

Thanks in advance

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