Hi, I also wrote an essay for this prompt, if someone could please take a look at it and rate it for me, I would greatly appreciate it!
Essay:
The argument presents the claim that the Apogee Company should close all of its field offices and conduct all its operations from one location under the pretense that it would improve profitability by cutting costs and making it easier to supervise employees. However, the argument is based on a lack of convincing evidence, baseless jumps to conclusions, and weak analysis of the little evidence that is utilized. As a result, the argument is weak, unconvincing, and contains several flaws that could be strengthened in many different ways.
To begin with, the argument mentions that when the Apogee Company had all its operations in one location, it was more profitable than it is today. On one hand, while this piece of information may initially seem somewhat convincing on a surface level, deeper insight exposes the many flaws of this statement and
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Essay:
The argument presents the claim that the Apogee Company should close all of its field offices and conduct all its operations from one location under the pretense that it would improve profitability by cutting costs and making it easier to supervise employees. However, the argument is based on a lack of convincing evidence, baseless jumps to conclusions, and weak analysis of the little evidence that is utilized. As a result, the argument is weak, unconvincing, and contains several flaws that could be strengthened in many different ways.
To begin with, the argument mentions that when the Apogee Company had all its operations in one location, it was more profitable than it is today. On one hand, while this piece of information may initially seem somewhat convincing on a surface level, deeper insight exposes the many flaws of this statement and
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Statistics : Posted by wasario • on 08 Oct 2023, 21:33 • Replies 2 • Views 230
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