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The argument in the local newspaper claims that residents of San Perdito would be best served if they impeached Montoya and reelected Varra as mayor because in Montoya’s tenure as mayor the city experienced a decline in population, an increase in unemployment rates, and the closing of businesses, but conversely experienced an increase in population and a decrease unemployment rate in Varro’s time. However, the argument is flawed because it jumps to the conclusion that Varro was responsible for the prosperity of the city while Montoya was responsible for its deterioration. Furthermore, the argument relies on assumptions for which there is no clear evidence making its conclusion weak and unconvincing.
First, the argument fails to discuss or consider the magnitude of the increase or decrease in population and unemployment rates. Perhaps, in Varro’s time the population increased and unemployment rates decreased by
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The argument in the local newspaper claims that residents of San Perdito would be best served if they impeached Montoya and reelected Varra as mayor because in Montoya’s tenure as mayor the city experienced a decline in population, an increase in unemployment rates, and the closing of businesses, but conversely experienced an increase in population and a decrease unemployment rate in Varro’s time. However, the argument is flawed because it jumps to the conclusion that Varro was responsible for the prosperity of the city while Montoya was responsible for its deterioration. Furthermore, the argument relies on assumptions for which there is no clear evidence making its conclusion weak and unconvincing.
First, the argument fails to discuss or consider the magnitude of the increase or decrease in population and unemployment rates. Perhaps, in Varro’s time the population increased and unemployment rates decreased by
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