CrackVerbalGMAT wrote:
I think you need to allocate some time towards the end to remove any grammatical mistakes. I will point out the more obvious ones-
"This conclusion is based on that President Leonards actions" - I think you meant "based on the belief that". You need an apostrophe here -"Leonard's".
"Therefore, the conclusion is relies on weak premises" - remove the"is".
"It could also have been caused by the actions of the previous president, whose effects are delayed
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