I incorrectly chose E, but looking at it I think it boils down to passive/active and the GMAT's preference for an active sentence. I otherwise don't see the error in E
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AmritaSarkar89 wrote:
daagh wrote:
This is essentially a question of the proper word order and modification.
(A) A male musician can find a career as a solo performer, an orchestra member, or a music teacher after he graduates from college with a degree in music, depending on his talent. ----‘Depending on his talent’, modifies the entire clause and hence should find its place at the beginning of the sentence.
(A) A male musician can find a career as a solo performer, an orchestra member, or a music teacher after he graduates from college with a degree in music, depending on his talent. ----‘Depending on his talent’, modifies the entire clause and hence should find its place at the beginning of the sentence.
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