Wrong : In contrast to the trapeze artists, who fumbled their routine, the antics of the circus clowns
kept the audience entertained for hours.
The corrected version of this sentence is given as:
Corrected : In contrast to the trapeze artists, who fumbled their routine, the circus clowns
kept the audience entertained for hours with their antics.
Here, my concern is "with their antics" should not this phrase be placed next to the Circus clowns ??
If the corrected version is correct
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kept the audience entertained for hours.
The corrected version of this sentence is given as:
Corrected : In contrast to the trapeze artists, who fumbled their routine, the circus clowns
kept the audience entertained for hours with their antics.
Here, my concern is "with their antics" should not this phrase be placed next to the Circus clowns ??
If the corrected version is correct
...
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