Japanese researchers are producing a series of robots that can identify human facialexpressions, to which they will then respond; their goal is primarily creating a robot that will empathize with us.
Issues:Parallelism | Modifier | Pronoun
Analysis:
1. The sentence connects two independent clauses
2. The original sentence has issue with pronoun ambiguity with "they" and "their" and the form of the verb "create"
I have highlighted the issues below:
(A) expressions,
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Issues:Parallelism | Modifier | Pronoun
Analysis:
1. The sentence connects two independent clauses
2. The original sentence has issue with pronoun ambiguity with "they" and "their" and the form of the verb "create"
I have highlighted the issues below:
(A) expressions,
...

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