According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.
Issue:Modifier | Construction
Analysis:
1. Core of the sentence: "new style of aircraft.. could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours"
2. Modifiers have to be placed in a way that conveys the meaning succinctly.
A. According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the
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Issue:Modifier | Construction
Analysis:
1. Core of the sentence: "new style of aircraft.. could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours"
2. Modifiers have to be placed in a way that conveys the meaning succinctly.
A. According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the
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