Hi, I would greatly appreciate it if someone would be able to look over my first essay, I want to know if I'm on the right track, or if I'm missing the point. I tried to use the template posted on this forum. Thanks!
The following appeared as part of a campaign to sell advertising time on a local radio station to local businesses:
“The Cumquat Café began advertising on our local radio station this year and was delighted to see its business
increase by 10 percent over last year’s totals.
...
The following appeared as part of a campaign to sell advertising time on a local radio station to local businesses:
“The Cumquat Café began advertising on our local radio station this year and was delighted to see its business
increase by 10 percent over last year’s totals.
...
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