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A has a problem of parallelism: was neither prestigious..... nor was....
It should be:neither was prestigious.... nor was often played...
"Having been " could modify eitherthe clause or the noun before it However, let me remind you thatmeaning is essential , and it was Andres Segovia who was won over by the instrument, so "having been quot; should modify Andres Segovia; pitifully, the modifier is misplaced.
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A has a problem of parallelism: was neither prestigious..... nor was....
It should be:neither was prestigious.... nor was often played...
"Having been " could modify eitherthe clause or the noun before it However, let me remind you thatmeaning is essential , and it was Andres Segovia who was won over by the instrument, so "having been quot; should modify Andres Segovia; pitifully, the modifier is misplaced.
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