Faced with an estimated $2 billion budget gap, the city’s mayorproposed a nearly 17 percent reduction in the amount allocated the previous year to maintain the city’s major cultural institutions and to subsidize hundreds of local arts groups.
Issue:Parallelism | Construction
Analysis:
1. The non-underlined portion of the sentence shows that themayor was faced with the budget gap andthat gap prompted him to propose a reduction . These two actions should be parallel. The temporal relationship is implied
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Issue:Parallelism | Construction
Analysis:
1. The non-underlined portion of the sentence shows that themayor was faced with the budget gap andthat gap prompted him to propose a reduction . These two actions should be parallel. The temporal relationship is implied
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