nailin16 wrote:
A - eventually salary increases- incorrect 'eventually' is an adverb , it can't modify a noun.
B-same error as A plus introduction of ''having'' which is totally incorrect in this context.
Comma+ modifier should modify the previous clause and this case it doesn't make sense at all.
C - seems fine
D- comma + verb ing doesn't make sense here , it doesn't describe the former clause or reflects any causal effect.
E - totally awkward construction - 'not one that reflected that ' we should reject
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