Hi,
I would rate this essay between 2.5 to 3. Don't be disappointed and lose your hope. The essay is small, i guess its around 350 words. If you want get above 4.5 or 5, your essay must be between 500-600 words
. Also your essay lacks few details and strong points that will make the reader to get impressed and provide you the score you are expecting
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I would rate this essay between 2.5 to 3. Don't be disappointed and lose your hope. The essay is small, i guess its around 350 words. If you want get above 4.5 or 5, your essay must be between 500-600 words


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