KapTeacherEli wrote:
akijuneja wrote:
Dear kapeliteacher
Please give your valuable advice on this.
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Hi akujuneja,Please give your valuable advice on this.
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You've posted a few essays recently, and while they have been improving a little bit, you're still making some of the same errors over and over again. What resources are you working from to help improve your writing? Are you studying from any guides like theKaplan Premier book ? It will be much easier for you to self-evaluate your
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