"a number of a flaws"
"inability to address assumptions", I would phrase this a little differently. Maybe you'd like to say that the assumptions are flawed or open to criticism.
"also does not also"
to "help" understand these trends, or something of that sort. Just "understand" does not work here.
"can be 'made' well-reasoned"
Overall, I think some of the points raised are really good, but they could have been phrased much better. Also,
...
"inability to address assumptions", I would phrase this a little differently. Maybe you'd like to say that the assumptions are flawed or open to criticism.
"also does not also"
to "help" understand these trends, or something of that sort. Just "understand" does not work here.
"can be 'made' well-reasoned"
Overall, I think some of the points raised are really good, but they could have been phrased much better. Also,
...
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